The War

I feel this pain inside me and its passing through my veins, To live a second without you makes me grow deeply insane.. The love we once shared is all lost, You should have known my love came without a cost.. Now all that remains is the feeling of resent.. My heart is broken beyond amend My strength is drained and my soul is weak, my heart is numb and it will forever be.. I'm not strong enough like i once was and it hurts to see that i can never recover. I should have remained a heartless soul A stone as i would say is what i should have been more. Just like a statue you see on a bend, made of rock, brick and cement. But you stole my heart and tricked me, And today i lie here in defeat. I've lost all hope and i'll never see you again. So you can finally say that you've won the war my friend.

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Beata Agustin

October 1, 2024 at 9:18 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

February 22, 2016 at 10:58 PM

Nice to see this one again. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

September 22, 2013 at 8:18 AM

Hello Jessica, happy to visit this poem again.... I'll be back on a later to in hopes you will post another poem or poems... always looking forward in reading new poems... xox~ Linda

Dash Black

September 20, 2013 at 12:42 PM

I loved the flow and the way you poured out your words. Nice piece of art, really love can be a war at times.

Litan Dey

September 14, 2013 at 10:06 PM

A new war in love and thrust by jessica....practical concept and i like the real one most.Great job...congratulation ****from new friend Litan***

Danesh Morgan

September 5, 2013 at 11:25 PM

i feel you. . . not coz of your heart broken but the feeling of lost and being useless. . . Congrats on your win. Morgan

Skat A

September 4, 2013 at 6:29 PM

Hi Jessica, congratulations...SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

September 4, 2013 at 8:01 AM

Good morning Jessica, , congratulations in Nathan's any poem contest... Linda

Hsu Mr

August 28, 2013 at 4:18 AM

Nice poem.

Vinayak Pratap

August 24, 2013 at 1:26 AM

nice feel to it

Skat A

August 22, 2013 at 8:27 PM

Jessica, , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat * :-)

Carolina Jamies

August 22, 2013 at 7:24 PM

gr8 poem.i love it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 22, 2013 at 2:03 PM

Welcome to P-Soup, Jessica ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

August 22, 2013 at 12:45 PM

hello Jessica, wow...kind of encouraging. I very much enjoyed this brilliant piece, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@