The Want To Be Free

Where is the river that follows the breeze.
 The one that goes and flows along with ease.
No cares or worries about life trials.
Just free to bask along in the new miles.

For sure this journey will someday find an end.
Out to the vast ocean by canyons and bends.
Carried along in the path of the wind.
Life held by nature and the love that she sends.

No raging waters to find natures voice.
Just amazement and beauty in Gods choice.
In a mind exist the place to be free.
Where the wind blows the river to the sea.

To nature man has nothing over thee.
You hold our soul and the want to be free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 28, 2009 at 3:51 AM
Hello Judy, I like the last line, and yes i am not against Scientist, as it is the same wisdom and knowledge, the same God gave them to know, all they know, but as you rightly said: man's nature have nothing over thee. he hold our soul and is in him we live move, and have our being, without his divine intervention we are, and can do nothing. Great poem Abe
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January 11, 2009 at 2:25 PM
Judy, I had a wonderful time reading YOU I wait with bated breath for YOUR next set of POEMS YOU are truely an up and coming POET Laureate I am pleased to meet YOU LOVE...HG
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January 11, 2009 at 1:01 AM
Judy this is really nice you did such a great job with it . Laurie
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