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The Waltzing Duo

Tremor Out of the void, A whisper, a sound rises A flock of swallows sudden flight Echos Upon Hidden valleys Reaching out, a fiddle Its origin, just a riddle Begins. A step Then a second And the dance has begun Two in step upon the cadence Of waltz. Duo, Holding so close An arm around the waist A hand in a hand, eyes locked They sway. The birds' Sudden return Feeling safe and happy For love has sprung in the valley So green Opened Hidden no more For the sun has risen And smiles to the duo waltzing As one. By CarolineCécile Copyright © Feb. 2011

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Date: 2/9/2011 7:35:00 PM
Is this for the dance contest? It's very nice, CAroline. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/9/2011 6:02:00 PM
A very descriptive write.
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