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The Walls Laughed Back

The poet chuckled and the walls laughed back! They were her friends, after all, with nary a crack. The walls watched her pen, her bleeding heart out. Their wall souls, were her earth angels, clearly no doubt. They were there for her,always at dawn and at night. In howling winds and storms, they kept her warm and from fright. Delightful companions for all gastromomic events were they. Well-mannered, they partook as she dined, fine manners, had they! They worried, too,watching her walk with her rollator. They much preferred that,than seeing her be a couch potato! When the stars came out,she’d blow a loving kiss to them. Her stalwart friends,in the blue moonlight of her whispered, Amen! 4/9/2023

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/9/2023 12:21:00 PM

You have very polite walls Pangie. Thanks for the info about your blog for Chantelle's birthday!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/9/2023 12:39:00 PM

And really, the they are very polite. They used to drink a lot, but I got them to go to AA meetings and no more wobbly wood or splinters in my fingers. LOL Panagiota

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/9/2023 10:09:00 AM

A creative write. Since the walls see all, they can "LAUGHED BACK." I really enjoyed this one. Have a blessed day writing away....................

Elena Eagle

Date: 4/9/2023 8:46:00 AM

A really creative piece of poetry. One can clearly envision the walls in their full glory.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/9/2023 9:10:00 AM

Yes. I agree with your academically, fine tuned analysis.OPA! Look at your Avatar! It has old glory on it, as the walls have poetic glory))) tres bien! Pangie xo

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/9/2023 4:15:00 AM

Love this fantasy poem Pangie, who knows what secrets walls hold, especially when the poet’s pen rolls… Belle

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/9/2023 4:51:00 AM

You make me laugh, Belle! There’s many poems I cannot post.-)))). However, a great UK mentor in poetry told me to read aloud as I write))) thus these walls, also blush at times. Tee-Hee… Naughty Marietta aka. Pangie (forgot if that were a song or a musical. Hmmm…thanks, Belle!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/9/2023 12:48:00 AM

O, I'd love to purchase a 'front-row-spot' on your walls, Dear Pangie!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/9/2023 4:13:00 AM

ROFLMAO, G-MAN! You would have loved me on stage in Chicago a lot better! I think I will move to Israel. And be on night patrol with a rifle.. fun! A walker and a rifle and me,protecting Hebron! Along with Sha’i! Be. Tekoa! Don’t mess with THE PANGIE. Thank you…PR

Susan Lawrence

Date: 4/8/2023 4:24:00 PM

Pangie, I love the friendship you have created with the walls and the writer . Filled with fantasy and humor and touching nuances of caring . Colorful and loving . I smiled while reading your magic ! Love and hugs, Susan :)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/8/2023 4:41:00 PM

Dearest Susan, I am so very happy with all the characteristics you discovered upon reading this. I, too, smiled, I will not lie! It was a fun, fun fantasy write. Ever grateful For your visit… Hugs, Pangie