The Wall Between Us

The Wall Between Us

There stands a barrier between us.
A wall in the most literal sense.
But it's taken on another form,
The height of which stands immense.

There was a crack within it once.
As a carpenter, you patched it well.
Now on your side of the mended wall
You choose to hide away and dwell.

You spoke of desire within your heart,
And even promised your love is true.
What keeps you away and confined 
Behind a prison wall built by you?

You created a rampart I will not cross,
For to breach it I fear I may stumble.
If I could I'd ask the Israelite, Joshua,
To make your wall weak and crumble.

With restraint, I will not seek a way
To open a crack in your wall once more.
If you truly love me you will discover,
Within your wall you can build a door.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Viswan Bhatia Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 10:51 AM
WOW.....what a deep writing...loved this :)
Lane Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 11:11 AM
Hi, Rem...I really appreciate that you went back to read this one. It's long been one of my favorites...sad as it is. Thank you.
Barchettadrive Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 1:03 AM
Oh my Lin, does this hit home???! Great rhyming thru & thru! Great story telling abilities you have. I can tell it is straight from the heart too! I have some demolition to undertake after reading this! Thank YOU!!!!
Lane Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 1:06 AM
I'll send you a sledge hammer if you think it'll help. It was straight from the heart...every tedious moment spent wondering...will he make the next move or not? I'm so glad you relate to it, and thank you for your kind AND humorous comment. Let me know if that wall comes down or if there's a new door.
Negron Flores Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 10:34 PM
Excellent poem.
Lane Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 5:43 AM
Thank you for the compliment, Nayda.
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