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Bridge of Spies movie poster

Young Germans on the wrong side of a wall. Imagine, if you can, their awful dread! Before that great monstrosity can fall, young Germans on the wrong side of a wall, knowing the cost of freedom is not small, climb up that wall, but soldiers shoot them dead. Young Germans on the wrong side of a wall. Imagine, if you can, their awful dread. A short time later, many miles away, a barrier is safely being crossed. Youngsters jump a tall fence, but it’s child’s play. A short time later, many miles away, no need to tremble or to think to pray, these kids have no inkling of freedom’s cost. A short time later, many miles away, a barrier is safely being crossed. 3/21/2016 for the Pick a Theme Poetry Contest of craig cornish Based on scenes from the movie: Bridge of Spies

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Date: 3/29/2016 9:56:00 AM
Awesome.
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Date: 3/23/2016 1:16:00 PM
Beautifully expressed the scene of the picture. Though i have not seen this picture, i can think from your beautiful poem. Good luck my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 3/22/2016 11:12:00 AM
It seems almost unimaginable. You captured the theme well Andrea. It's one of the best movies I have seen in a long time.
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Date: 3/22/2016 1:38:00 AM
G'day Andrea ... you revive old memories here of watching all the action on TV. I don't know the movie but the reality was certainly tense - Lindsay
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Date: 3/21/2016 7:46:00 PM
The Berlin Wall I knew of it well! Freedom is something many take for granted! Love the write!
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Date: 3/21/2016 7:05:00 PM
So you are getting political! The Cold War is largely over and the wall is down. I am a registered Democrat and am still deciding about who to vote for in the primary. Who - may I ask - are you backing for President. Lincoln and Eugene McCarthy were 2 politicians who wrote verse. I just sold an article about the Petrified Forest for $50. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/21/2016 4:02:00 PM
another great entry for the contest, craig will have a hard time judging. and yes old poe,s are excepted on my new contest... hugs xx
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Date: 3/21/2016 1:50:00 PM
Andrea, great entry of the contest, wonderfully penned, best of luck, I am liking this 7 ~
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Date: 3/21/2016 12:30:00 PM
this kind of freedom is worth fighting for... such a liberating piece, andie... wow; huggs!
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Date: 3/21/2016 12:01:00 PM
Nice poem Andrea....People who paid for the freedom will only understand its value.....
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Date: 3/21/2016 11:05:00 AM
Didn't see the movie, but puts me in mind of Ronald Reagan and Robert Frost. Your comparison is great. Love, daver
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Date: 3/21/2016 10:15:00 AM
Great work Andrea, good luck in the contest...
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Date: 3/21/2016 10:02:00 AM
Awesome, awesome, awesome - 7 ... CayCay
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