The Wall

It was decades ago,
When my two eyes were young,
That they savored the Tiergarten
And Kurfurstendamm—
That avenue, tree-lined,
With Berliners, it bustled—
And Tempelhof airport,
Where pilots, undaunted,
Overflew the blockade;

And the river Spree flowed
Through the heart of the city
And, there, in the East
Rose the Brandenburg Gate
Though, always, these eyes,
Spurred on by intrigue,
Wandered their way
To monuments marking
Where tyranny triumphed
And Germans had vanquished,
Vanquished pursuing
The hope of their freedom—

Yes, Berlin I once saw
And, still, to this day,
What affected me most
Was the scar of
	The Wall.



October 25, 2016
The Wall poetry contest
Anthony Slausen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/29/2016 7:57:00 PM
I think when anyone mentions the Wall even today our first thought of anyone past 50 would be of Berlin. I enjoyed your poem David. I have a tiny piece of the wall with a framed picture of the wall hanging on my wall. A great write! Congratulations on your placement David. 7 ; )
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Date: 10/29/2016 1:35:00 PM
I loved the personal viewpoint. You have taken us with you to the place and the time ! Well done !!
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Date: 10/29/2016 9:02:00 AM
Congrats well-done great poem x
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Date: 10/26/2016 1:37:00 PM
This poem is too good dear David,enjoyed it! The scar of the Berlin wall....remains...nicely written, GOOD LUCK:)//love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/25/2016 8:18:00 AM
I like this poem. Good luck in the contest!
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