The Wall

I never saw your writing against the silent wall I never heard those footsteps walking to the door Like a sunset shadow you faded in my dusk Left upon my doorknob just a venetian mask A mask with many faces and unforgotten past A thousand million secrets and questions never asked No please,don't go reminding me of a time before Of those wistful moments that now I don't recall The stonehenged shrine of my heart is over six feet tall Cracks do let the light in but the wall resists to fall No please,don't go reminding me of a time before Of those wistful moments that now I don't recall Was there ever a vision with the beauty of your eyes Was there ever a fire with the passion of our nights Was there ever a sweet warmth where velvets bled a rose Was there ever a seashore where my fingers brushed your toes Was there ever a tree trunk where stars have carved our dream Was there ever a stream walk where our starved lips weren't sealed No please,don't go reminding me of a time before Of those wistful moments that now I don't recall The stonehenged shrine of my heart is over six feet tall I never saw your writing against the silent wall
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Lawless Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:14 AM
I'm with Carrie, Chairmaine. This should be set to music. Great write and the repetition of the "No please don't go....." echoes in the loneliness. A 7
Richards Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 1:18 PM
As beautiful and sad as unrequited love could possibly be. This should be set to some soulful music ! A wonderful poem, Charmaine!
Cheema Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Love the gentle flow with which you express your emotions! Congrats Charmaine!
Rycroft Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Congrats well-done great write
Lindley Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 8:23 AM
Just now found this gem. Adding this one to my fav list. I rarely ever do that with any other than rhyme/sonnets/ballads but this is fantastic writing!! A7 and this poem is outstanding!!
Resital Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 2:48 PM
Amazing poem! I totally enjoyed this work of art!
Mcdaid Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 7:40 AM
truly beautifully painted piece charmaine excellent pen dear pal
Holmes Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 4:26 AM
"against the silent wall", powerful, beautiful and deep...a great write Charmaine
Beesley Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 8:11 PM
concrete cold and captivating
Hamilton Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 2:41 AM
gorgeous pen Charmaine love it hugs 7 + fav
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 4:53 PM
wow,Charma. This is outstanding work. Gotta FAVE it.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 23, 2015 at 9:48 AM
Hi Charmaine, look up my poem "A Dozen Roses Multiplied". Based on your comment on Paul's poem I suspect you will appreciate it. In fact you may consider sharing it with your husband.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 9:16 AM
I really liked the comment you posted on Eileen's poem. You are a beautiful person. I think five compliments a day is a great approach to life.
May Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 9:03 AM
Perhaps you would consider switching "A million thousand secrets" to "A thousand million secrets"
Hill Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 11:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this piece CC. Well done, again...TAH
Fiery Avatar
January 21, 2015 at 12:24 AM
I feel so inspired now ! I have not written anything for so long...my dear poetess , you have done wonders here! 100/100
Lamoureux Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 9:18 AM
I miss your writing, I know you have lots of poetry yet to be expressed!
Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 3:12 PM
A beautiful poem, that flows like the nile river. It unfolds gracefully and I thoroughly enjoyed being immersed within it.
Yvonne Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 6:35 AM
Another excellent lyric Char, is a new song using these lyrics next!
Relish Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 1:02 AM
Wow loved the poem Charmaine... 'where my fingers brushed youf toes'... you have captured minute details #7... hugs, nad!
Lamoureux Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 7:52 PM
You are so talented, what a lovely piece. It deserves higher than a 7!
Peranteau Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 6:31 PM
As I read, I stepped down...slowly on each stanza, to finnally find myself..."against the silent wall". *smiles* I missed you my dear friend ! Noah is getting to show those young preeeeeeeeteeeeen looks, and how handsom he is ! Hows yer lil' darl'n ? Blessing to you and yours
Goswami Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 3:06 PM
"I never saw your writing against the silent wall"....Super ending of the heartfelt piece of poetry. Best wishes to you.
Onclaud Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 9:42 AM
stirring my emotions as you languidly express deep memories of love's passing, charms...the repetition of lines highlight the poignant tints of your images.. radiant!.. huggs
Zerbst Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 5:20 PM
It is so wonderful how you create a complete world in each of your poems. A world where there are two dimensions, the one you are describing, and the many things it is compared to. You know, the silent wall means so much more than the wall, etc.
Vaso Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 3:23 PM
I loved this poem, Charmaine!
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