The Wall

I waited to see 
My reflection in you 
My eagerness reached the sky. 
As the day passes Its strength spreads to the universe.   
Days passed as the seconds. 
Neither I saw 
The spread of my reflection 
To the world 
Nor I saw it in your eyes.   
You never knew me 
And never tried for that. 
The only thing you had 
Is the shapeless, figure less  
Shadow of mine.   
I will never say 
That you do nothing You do a lot. 
You cover me 
You wrapped my personality. 
As if the ashes covers the cinder 
Though I persisted to glow 
You showered as rain on me.   
You are always 
A painful fence for me 
You prevent my journey 
You closed 
The world of a free bird 
Before me 
That always awaited for 
My arrival.   
I see the increase In your force of compress 
Like the destructive flood. .
But I can’t be 
A  person without words. 
I can’t be action less. 
I can’t be vision less. 
I am not suppose 
To end my life in between you, 
The walls. 
I have to reach 
The heart of the living spirit 
And have to burnish 
Everything around me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 7, 2013 at 8:15 PM
Ashly,, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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September 11, 2013 at 10:40 AM
Hi, Thanks for your support. I am from Kerala (India) studying in tenth.Since I am a student I don't know more about poetry. I just write what I am surrounding.I have written some poems and I would like to write more.I wish that you will read my poems and correct me which will lead to my improvement.
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September 6, 2013 at 1:35 PM
hi Ashly, I like your wall poem, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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September 6, 2013 at 11:31 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Ashly ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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