The Wall

We worked together And built a wall, Brick by brick Was laid in place. The puzzle Of our lives Became That wall. How sad it was To discover We lived On opposite sides.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 6, 2013 at 10:40 PM
:-) enjoying your Featured Poem of the week. take care and have yourself a great coming week. xox~ LINDA"
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July 4, 2013 at 10:06 AM
WILLIAM, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. have a nice 4th of July. *SKAT
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August 14, 2012 at 8:21 AM
wow, good one William, the wall, walls
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November 16, 2011 at 12:53 AM
This poem is gracious and full of beauty! Keep on building up your poems and post them! :D (David B)
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November 15, 2011 at 11:14 AM
wow great ending, and everything in-between.
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October 12, 2011 at 3:44 PM
Thids one makes me think about the predicament of life, the puzzles that is left unsolved even though we keep on trying ! You leave a great message in every poem of urs...keep posting !
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