The Wall

Created from water and clay,
cracking under the weight.
So lonely, imperfect, rough
and waiting for your touch.

When asked it’ll tell you 'bout those
who crumbled under the weight,
created of water and clay
and longing to be touched.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Agustin Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 10:25 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Sulkowski Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 11:23 PM
Thank you for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed the poem
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