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Created from water and clay, cracking under the weight. So lonely, imperfect, rough and waiting for your touch. When asked it’ll tell you 'bout those who crumbled under the weight, created of water and clay and longing to be touched.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 12/28/2024 10:25:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 12/28/2024 11:23:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed the poem

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