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Poetic Form: Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 August 14
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I journey in thoughts in breathless strolls every turn straightened, and bumps made smooth my life whose trust in God, faith controls pass sparked eyes, climbed smiles, the wealth of souls perks in life that gift my heart and soothe Be the stills of the night that shades day the noontime of Spring and Summer Eve and Autumn colors having their weigh to impress snowflakes, window display roam throughout my blest years I achieve At work, everything is play by play but I shake and bake, easy as pie friends for lunch at a sidewalk cafe at the church, had communion and pray then trekked home, smiling that satisfy The internal spirit externals the facts of my life great from the start each passing day juices my kernels joy jogged entries, my daily journals when my life part, find me in your heart.

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Date: 8/14/2024 8:12:00 PM
'Autumn colors having their weigh'old age gives the jitters, we got to trek home with satisfying smile, amazing meaning there. happy writing dear poet.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/14/2024 8:23:00 PM
Thanks thriveni, most generous of you--I'm jamming my posting before I leave the country soon. Adios & Aloha William
Date: 8/14/2024 11:17:00 AM
Indeed you are. Thanks for sharing!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/14/2024 2:29:00 PM
Welcome, my friend. Aloha William

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