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The waiting room, we go into it Intuit Says fear and what ifs await A weight Hangs heavy 'pon shoulders Smolders Then sags, lips droop, eyes dim Brim With tears until 'Til The doctor says all is well Well! An Echo Verse poem. A novelty type of verse. I thought I would give it a try. Written: January 07, 2023

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Di11y Da11y

Date: 1/27/2023 5:32:00 AM

Lovely :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/27/2023 7:03:00 AM

Thanks for the smiley face. Sara

Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/18/2023 7:00:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading this poem with its most effective word-echo chamber. Congratulations! Very creative. Cheers Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/19/2023 3:05:00 AM

Thank you, Brian. I thought I would try to do it that way using homophones. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/9/2023 8:33:00 AM

Wonderfully done! Done! Perhaps I will try. Try! I echo your bells, resounding. Resounding! <3

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/9/2023 1:35:00 PM

Thank you for the echo. I appreciate the humor. Your visits are always delightful. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 1/8/2023 8:18:00 PM

This a an interesting form of poetry ! You have successfully accomplished the task. Lovely poem, Sara. Kudos !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/9/2023 3:55:00 AM

Valsa, Thanks for the nice compliment. Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/8/2023 4:28:00 AM

Great form, Sara:) simply astounding:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/8/2023 6:32:00 AM

Thank you, Jo. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/8/2023 3:52:00 AM

Goodness Sara! you did accomplish such a masterpiece of Echo Verse! Rings solidly! I love it! You are blessed with so much talent!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/8/2023 6:29:00 AM

Thank you, Jim. I appreciate the compliment. Sara