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The Waiting Room

The waiting room, we go into it
Intuit
Says fear and what ifs await
A weight 
Hangs heavy 'pon shoulders
Smolders
Then sags, lips droop, eyes dim
Brim
With tears until 
'Til
The doctor says all is well 
Well!    

An Echo Verse poem. A novelty type of verse. I thought I would give it a try. 
Written: January 07, 2023

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Brian Sambourne January 18, 2023 at 7:00 PM I really enjoyed reading this poem with its most effective word-echo chamber. Congratulations! Very creative. Cheers Brian Sara Kendrick January 19, 2023 at 3:05 AM Thank you, Brian. I thought I would try to do it that way using homophones. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Kim Rodrigues January 9, 2023 at 8:33 AM Wonderfully done! Done! Perhaps I will try. Try! I echo your bells, resounding. Resounding! <3 Sara Kendrick January 9, 2023 at 1:35 PM Thank you for the echo. I appreciate the humor. Your visits are always delightful. Sara

Valsa George January 8, 2023 at 8:18 PM This a an interesting form of poetry ! You have successfully accomplished the task. Lovely poem, Sara. Kudos ! Sara Kendrick January 9, 2023 at 3:55 AM Valsa, Thanks for the nice compliment. Sara

Joanna Daniel January 8, 2023 at 4:28 AM Great form, Sara:) simply astounding:) Sara Kendrick January 8, 2023 at 6:32 AM Thank you, Jo. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

James Marshall Goff January 8, 2023 at 3:52 AM Goodness Sara! you did accomplish such a masterpiece of Echo Verse! Rings solidly! I love it! You are blessed with so much talent! Sara Kendrick January 8, 2023 at 6:29 AM Thank you, Jim. I appreciate the compliment. Sara