thriveni c mysore Poet Verse

The wait

Chairing old thoughts, rocking gently,
Living with chaotic aging blight,
I do keep yearning calmly
To travel day and night
With sun's silent chariot blithely.


Note: JM's Paint a Picture poetry contest: image 1

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Karen Croft July 21, 2024 at 7:44 PM A fantastic poem for the contest! Congrats thriveni c mysore July 21, 2024 at 9:17 PM Yes dear poet, thank you. a string of pearls of youth becomes a gem solitaire in old age. that is the truth. ha. thank you very much for the kind visit.Blessings & cheers.

Paula Goldsmith July 18, 2024 at 8:43 AM Congratulations on your win. "The Wait" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading this one... Have a great day writing away.................. thriveni c mysore July 18, 2024 at 8:12 PM Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am glad you liked my poem. Thank you for the blessings. Cheers.

Joseph May July 18, 2024 at 5:45 AM Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win thriveni c mysore July 18, 2024 at 8:10 PM Thank you so much for the placement and wishes dear poet. Thank you for this day's joy. Blessings & cheers.

Valsa George July 15, 2024 at 4:30 AM This is beautiful, dear Thriveni. A solitary and serene spot to spend the sunset years. Liked it. All the Best. thriveni c mysore July 15, 2024 at 9:24 PM Old age is like that dear poet. solitary. Your words and visit is a joy. Thank you for the good wishes. Cheers.

Andrea Dietrich July 12, 2024 at 10:12 PM Creative take on the picture. It is the picture I liked best myself. thriveni c mysore July 13, 2024 at 4:07 AM Oh dear poet friend, thank you for your kind visit and words. I lost five strands of grey hairs to come up with the rhymes! ha. silly me (to say this). I am glad by your visit. Cheers