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The wait

Chairing old thoughts, rocking gently, Living with chaotic aging blight, I do keep yearning calmly To travel day and night With sun's silent chariot blithely. Note: JM's Paint a Picture poetry contest: image 1

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Karen Croft

Date: 7/21/2024 7:44:00 PM

A fantastic poem for the contest! Congrats

thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/21/2024 9:17:00 PM

Yes dear poet, thank you. a string of pearls of youth becomes a gem solitaire in old age. that is the truth. ha. thank you very much for the kind visit.Blessings & cheers.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/18/2024 8:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "The Wait" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading this one... Have a great day writing away..................

thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/18/2024 8:12:00 PM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. I am glad you liked my poem. Thank you for the blessings. Cheers.

Joseph May

Date: 7/18/2024 5:45:00 AM

Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win

thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/18/2024 8:10:00 PM

Thank you so much for the placement and wishes dear poet. Thank you for this day's joy. Blessings & cheers.

Valsa George

Date: 7/15/2024 4:30:00 AM

This is beautiful, dear Thriveni. A solitary and serene spot to spend the sunset years. Liked it. All the Best.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/15/2024 9:24:00 PM

Old age is like that dear poet. solitary. Your words and visit is a joy. Thank you for the good wishes. Cheers.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2024 10:12:00 PM

Creative take on the picture. It is the picture I liked best myself.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/13/2024 4:07:00 AM

Oh dear poet friend, thank you for your kind visit and words. I lost five strands of grey hairs to come up with the rhymes! ha. silly me (to say this). I am glad by your visit. Cheers