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The Wailing Beach Girl

Let me tell you a really sad story, The interesting saga of the "wailing beach girl", I attest to its fictional category, It has every nuance of a romantic whirl; A beautiful girl was once walking on the beach, When she met the most handsome man, He was the captain of a ship named "Water Peach", It was love at first sight, she became his fan; He too loved her outgoing temerity, And thus began their beach love dates, They loved each other with such sincerity, By the end of his trip, they were inseparable mates; Then, one day, he had to go back sailing, She was left all alone and felt barren, Every day, she sat on the beach wailing At the wide aperture he had left her in; She waited and waited for him to come back, Then, one day, got the news about "Water Peach" The ship had drowned. Her heart had a crack, She still thinks about him sitting on the beach; She had a proclivity towards the sea, For it was there, she met him first, Deep down in her marrow, she believes it to be Her first and last "true love" accursed. 11/05/18 Picture #2

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Date: 12/2/2018 9:16:00 AM
Jo, I enjoyed reading this sad romantic write and love the way you used the 8 words .. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/30/2018 8:54:00 PM
Beautifully written, Jo, using the required words. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:56:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jo
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Date: 11/27/2018 9:49:00 PM
Nice story and congrats on the win Jo!
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Date: 11/27/2018 8:15:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Jo - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! :-) <3
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Date: 11/27/2018 7:21:00 PM
Congrats!!! on the excellent win Jo...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 11/10/2018 10:54:00 AM
Congrats on the very well deserved win, Jo.
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Date: 11/10/2018 8:01:00 AM
Your story was completely captivating.. wow!
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Date: 11/9/2018 5:26:00 PM
Beautifully written Jo..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 11/9/2018 7:24:00 AM
Hi Jo, dropping by with my congratulations on your much deserved win in the contest, have a wonderful friday....Mike
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Date: 11/8/2018 6:47:00 PM
aha, it looks like you killed two birds with one stone here. Excellent thinking, Jo. I try to do that once in a while. Great story and congrats for your win.
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Date: 11/5/2018 1:30:00 PM
- A wonderful story, Jo ... even if it's sad - I wish you good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/5/2018 11:33:00 AM
Splendid imagination..I enjoyed reading your interpretation of the image.
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Date: 11/5/2018 10:51:00 AM
Absolutely beautifully sad my friend. You have captured the essence of the image perfectly. I think this will do very well in the contest.
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