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The Wafting Wind

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Cherl Dunn

November 4, 2014 at 9:35 AM

Beautfiul and elegant work here, a wonderful blending emotion and nature, cheri

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

November 4, 2014 at 7:08 AM

Wow it's wonderful Charmaine! Swiftly flowing, great!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

November 3, 2014 at 9:59 PM

Another beautiful and inspiring poem, Charmaine! I've read this one three times tonight and can't help coming back again...

Carrie Richards

November 3, 2014 at 5:54 PM

Oh, Charmaine.......there are some of your poems,, I say to myself...."She can't improve on this".....but then you exceed yourself once again. You had me with the "rise of sour yeast"...... your mind works wonders!!

Liam Mcdaid

November 3, 2014 at 4:48 PM

stirring beautifully penned wind charmaine blowing upon a golden pen dear friend

Sandip Goswami

November 3, 2014 at 3:15 PM

Very sweet, just like you....Enjoyed the moving without moving...Best wishes to you dear...

Casarah Nance

November 3, 2014 at 2:51 PM

Your moves are like the wind, slipping and filling up the empty spaces, well done sweetie :)

David Meade

November 3, 2014 at 2:32 PM

Outstanding! I feel the wind within your words, lifting me higher! The ending is spectacular, when two winds merge it is a climatic events -- powerful! All the best.