The Wabi-Sabi of Tintern Abbey

Things bloom more beautiful when breaking down.
The nave now ploughs through foams of flowering trees,
a frozen caravel.  Kissed by the breeze,
the river surface suddenly seems to frown
exquisitely. The apse’s jaunty crown
of weeds above one (sightless) eye would please
romantic poets. What was once a friese
lies strewn about, a shaley shanty-town.
We love whatever withers, atrophies.
To see a calked construction founder, drown
beneath its own detritus, by degrees
slough off its shape and, sinking to its knees,
expire, is satisfying. Velvet gown?
We’d much prefer to see a soiled chemise.

A lake?  A cloud?  A mountain?  Megan Fox?
If we acknowledge Beauty in these things,
what are we saying?  As when Smokey sings,
or girls emerge in slinky summer frocks,
something’s taking place outside the box
of regularity, and sprouting wings.
How might we classify these happenings?
A rupture in the norm?  The whole Baroque’s
built on this very point. If Beauty rocks,
what is the special quality it brings,
and why is it so pleasing?  Beauty flings
a spanner in the works of Orthodox,
and laughs at Workaday.  It mocks
our essence, lurks in quirks, and smirks at clocks.
                                                                                                                           
“The Wordsworth ouevre is cretinous.  Discuss.”
The Long, Laborious Quest, The Sparrow’s Nest,
The Noble Oak of Guernica, Addressed –
We can’t escape the feeling he’s a wuss.
His subjects are unconscionable, plus
the rhymes he uses are a facilefest.
If only he were even half in jest!
His humour’s unintentional, and thus
more entertaining than he could have guessed.
Yet something in his scribblings seems to wrest
significance from dross, analogous
to Newton’s differential calculus,
invented by the by, at whim’s behest.   
When Wordsworth falls apart, he’s at his best.
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Ashley Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 10:40 AM
Dear Michael, I was captivated by your intriguing and intricate imagery. Your potent strand of sonnets is rich, cleverly expressed and thought-provoking. I enjoyed the playful criticisms about traditional views on beauty and poetry, the appreciation of imperfections, and I relished complex emotions and feelings so poetically expressed. Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Coy Avatar
August 9, 2025 at 12:07 PM
Susan, I'm amazed. What a delightful review of my poem. You sat so much, so eloquently. I am sincerely grateful to you. Michael
Toney Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 5:03 PM
Michael, congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 3 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Brilliant write my friend. I Faved it so I can take time later to digest it all. :-) Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 4 has already started.
Coy Avatar
August 6, 2025 at 5:41 PM
Mark, thank you so much! I'm really enjoying the event! Michael
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