Premiere Contest WinnerThe Vow of Eternity

We found sapience in our sagacity,                     *    *       *   *
        true ROMANCE in our delicacy-                 *        *   *        *
No matter what happens to us,              ------ *    ------------------->  
I know your tide will set me free.                      *                      *
              For there is a flame and it’s been lit,       *                *
ignited by the KINDLE of you and me.                        *     *
                                                                                  *
        Craving of each other in weakness,     
for you are my only sweetness-
Sanctified and holy with truth, 
             with you I’ve found completeness. 
Your deep CHESTNUT eyes have made me see, 
  and they’ve been bound by the VOW of ETERNITY. 

          Sorrow has come and gone with ease, 
may this sincerity never cease-
With you I’ve found a TRUSTED companion,               
             someone who makes me fall to my knees. 
We found sapience in our sagacity, 
   IGNITED by the kindle of you and me. 

Cupid’s arrow     <-------  <-------  <-------      
                   pierced my gentle heart, 
passion races from your adoring dart-
We shall be lovers forever, my sweet;
better or worse, ‘til death do us part.
           Will there ever come a day you wish not to love me?
                                  For we’ve been bound by the VOW of ETERNITY. 



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This poem is so meaningful to me. I have been with my hubby since I was 16 years old, I am now 39. After being married for almost 17 years, I have found that our vows are definitely for eternity.

January 26th, 2018
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September 21, 2019 at 8:22 PM
Lu Loo, Congratulations!!!! 17 yrs. of marriage. God Blesses. Poem interesting. Sanctified and Holy with truth. Amen and Amen.
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June 9, 2019 at 10:26 PM
Your beautiful love poem reaches the depths of my heart, Luloo. A moving tribute to your everlasting love. Congratulations for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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June 6, 2019 at 12:42 PM
Another win for this lovely poem Luloo. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. I enjoyed reading this again! : ) xxoo
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May 13, 2019 at 4:47 AM
Your romantic tribute to your mate shines in this lovely poem Luloo. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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May 12, 2019 at 9:28 AM
The heart was a nice additional touch. Congrats on your placement in my contest.
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 4:06 PM
Sweetest one I am seeing in the contest! Congrats, Lu Loo. And I love the little drawing you were able to come up with as well.
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April 20, 2019 at 11:16 PM
Bravo, Lu Loo. Your heart and arrow diagram add so much visual delight to your winner of a poem.
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April 20, 2019 at 5:24 PM
Lu Loo, after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest has finally come to its end. Congratulations on placing 17th overall in the marathon! There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. Your participation in my contests is much appreciated. ~Mark
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January 6, 2019 at 9:20 PM
Lu Loo, this is a beautiful, heartfelt poem! Congrats on your first-place win on mile 9 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. By continuing to place in the contest you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
Scars Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 5:23 AM
I am so honored you have no idea, sorry for the delayed response :) Be blessed :)-luloo
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February 15, 2018 at 10:03 PM
Oh, this is so fluid and dynamic, with heartfelt romance in every syllable ... true love is the purest inspiration there is, and it creates the most direct translations between heart and word, and I can tell that this came directly from your core. Thank you for sharing such deep-seated emotion ... this touched me, and I rarely admit such things! Blessings and congrats, Luloo - another winner for me, and a fav. Blessings, Dear Poet Friend! :-) <3
Scars Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 5:22 AM
awww thank you dear man! :)-luloo
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February 5, 2018 at 12:05 AM
Beautiful expression of reality : my little words are not enough to praise your great words. Sorrow has come and gone with ease, may this sincerity never cease- With you I’ve found a TRUSTED companion, someone who makes me fall to my knees.
Scars Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 5:22 AM
thank you co much! :)-luloo
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February 4, 2018 at 1:28 PM
Back with congrats on your 2 well deserved wins, Laura.
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February 3, 2018 at 5:11 PM
Big congratulations again on this beautiful Valentine poem, Laura.. Hugs Eve
Scars Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 9:46 AM
aww thanks for all the kindness sweet Eve :)-luloo
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February 3, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Another win for this lovely poem Laura! Congratulations on your win!: )
Scars Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 9:46 AM
thank you lovely lady :)-luloo
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February 3, 2018 at 2:31 PM
Such a well-written, beautiful love poem, Laura. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 9:46 AM
many thanks sweet Sandra ;)-luloo
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February 2, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Congratulations for your top win! Excellent :)
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February 4, 2018 at 9:45 AM
many thanks sweet Heidi :)-luloo
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February 2, 2018 at 7:10 AM
Luloo, this is such a sweet beautiful poem. Congrats on your win. John
Scars Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 9:45 AM
thank you dear John :)-luloo
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February 1, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Congratulations, Laura, on your first placement for this lovely declaration of eternal love! : )
Scars Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 3:46 AM
thank you sweet Connie ; )-luloo
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February 1, 2018 at 8:27 PM
You really amaze me, Laura, congratulations on this lovely piece.
Scars Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 3:45 AM
awww thanks sweet Eve :) -luloo
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January 26, 2018 at 11:05 PM
O Laura, your pictograms add much to your poem. Superbly done.
Scars Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 3:45 AM
thank you dear Line ;) -luloo
Sands Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Very well done! Good luck in the contest :)
Scars Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 3:45 AM
many thanks sweet Heidi :) -luloo
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