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The Vow of Eternity Premiere Contest Winner

We found sapience in our sagacity, * * * * true ROMANCE in our delicacy- * * * * No matter what happens to us, ------ * -------------------> I know your tide will set me free. * * For there is a flame and it’s been lit, * * ignited by the KINDLE of you and me. * * * Craving of each other in weakness, for you are my only sweetness- Sanctified and holy with truth, with you I’ve found completeness. Your deep CHESTNUT eyes have made me see, and they’ve been bound by the VOW of ETERNITY. Sorrow has come and gone with ease, may this sincerity never cease- With you I’ve found a TRUSTED companion, someone who makes me fall to my knees. We found sapience in our sagacity, IGNITED by the kindle of you and me. Cupid’s arrow <------- <------- <------- pierced my gentle heart, passion races from your adoring dart- We shall be lovers forever, my sweet; better or worse, ‘til death do us part. Will there ever come a day you wish not to love me? For we’ve been bound by the VOW of ETERNITY. X X XX X X XXXXXX X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X XXXX X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X XXXXXX XX *** XXXXXX X X X This poem is so meaningful to me. I have been with my hubby since I was 16 years old, I am now 39. After being married for almost 17 years, I have found that our vows are definitely for eternity. January 26th, 2018

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Date: 9/21/2019 8:22:00 PM
Lu Loo, Congratulations!!!! 17 yrs. of marriage. God Blesses. Poem interesting. Sanctified and Holy with truth. Amen and Amen.
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Date: 6/9/2019 10:26:00 PM
Your beautiful love poem reaches the depths of my heart, Luloo. A moving tribute to your everlasting love. Congratulations for your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/6/2019 12:42:00 PM
Another win for this lovely poem Luloo. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. I enjoyed reading this again! : ) xxoo
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Date: 5/13/2019 4:47:00 AM
Your romantic tribute to your mate shines in this lovely poem Luloo. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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Date: 5/12/2019 9:28:00 AM
The heart was a nice additional touch. Congrats on your placement in my contest.
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Date: 4/21/2019 4:06:00 PM
Sweetest one I am seeing in the contest! Congrats, Lu Loo. And I love the little drawing you were able to come up with as well.
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Date: 4/20/2019 11:16:00 PM
Bravo, Lu Loo. Your heart and arrow diagram add so much visual delight to your winner of a poem.
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Date: 4/20/2019 5:24:00 PM
Lu Loo, after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest has finally come to its end. Congratulations on placing 17th overall in the marathon! There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. Your participation in my contests is much appreciated. ~Mark
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Date: 1/6/2019 9:20:00 PM
Lu Loo, this is a beautiful, heartfelt poem! Congrats on your first-place win on mile 9 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. By continuing to place in the contest you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/10/2019 5:23:00 AM
I am so honored you have no idea, sorry for the delayed response :) Be blessed :)-luloo
Date: 2/15/2018 10:03:00 PM
Oh, this is so fluid and dynamic, with heartfelt romance in every syllable ... true love is the purest inspiration there is, and it creates the most direct translations between heart and word, and I can tell that this came directly from your core. Thank you for sharing such deep-seated emotion ... this touched me, and I rarely admit such things! Blessings and congrats, Luloo - another winner for me, and a fav. Blessings, Dear Poet Friend! :-) <3
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/10/2019 5:22:00 AM
awww thank you dear man! :)-luloo
Date: 2/5/2018 12:05:00 AM
Beautiful expression of reality : my little words are not enough to praise your great words. Sorrow has come and gone with ease, may this sincerity never cease- With you I’ve found a TRUSTED companion, someone who makes me fall to my knees.
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/10/2019 5:22:00 AM
thank you co much! :)-luloo
Date: 2/4/2018 1:28:00 PM
Back with congrats on your 2 well deserved wins, Laura.
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Date: 2/3/2018 5:11:00 PM
Big congratulations again on this beautiful Valentine poem, Laura.. Hugs Eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/4/2018 9:46:00 AM
aww thanks for all the kindness sweet Eve :)-luloo
Date: 2/3/2018 3:35:00 PM
Another win for this lovely poem Laura! Congratulations on your win!: )
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/4/2018 9:46:00 AM
thank you lovely lady :)-luloo
Date: 2/3/2018 2:31:00 PM
Such a well-written, beautiful love poem, Laura. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/4/2018 9:46:00 AM
many thanks sweet Sandra ;)-luloo
Date: 2/2/2018 4:18:00 PM
Congratulations for your top win! Excellent :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/4/2018 9:45:00 AM
many thanks sweet Heidi :)-luloo
Date: 2/2/2018 7:10:00 AM
Luloo, this is such a sweet beautiful poem. Congrats on your win. John
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/4/2018 9:45:00 AM
thank you dear John :)-luloo
Date: 2/1/2018 9:57:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura, on your first placement for this lovely declaration of eternal love! : )
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/2/2018 3:46:00 AM
thank you sweet Connie ; )-luloo
Date: 2/1/2018 8:27:00 PM
You really amaze me, Laura, congratulations on this lovely piece.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/2/2018 3:45:00 AM
awww thanks sweet Eve :) -luloo
Date: 1/26/2018 11:05:00 PM
O Laura, your pictograms add much to your poem. Superbly done.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/2/2018 3:45:00 AM
thank you dear Line ;) -luloo
Date: 1/26/2018 1:54:00 PM
Very well done! Good luck in the contest :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/2/2018 3:45:00 AM
many thanks sweet Heidi :) -luloo

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