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The Vortex of Love

When we spin, we win of the positive blend be careful of sow becomes the debt we owe love may seek it's lost no matter the cost owe no man but love, the plan To see God''' is not by eyes of sod

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Funom Makama

Date: 3/2/2016 8:42:00 AM

What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 10/28/2014 7:36:00 PM

A powerful and inspirational read! Thank you for sharing!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2014 10:05:00 AM

moe... I am brought to a space where unconditional love of god's plan becomes the center of our life... beautiful.. selah and huggs

John Freeman
Date: 10/10/2014 4:54:00 PM

Love in action is life itself, we would not even be without it's power. To be or not to be love is a choice we make.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/26/2014 1:53:00 PM

"To see God''' is not by eyes of sod"..This earthly tabernacle has to be changed..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/19/2014 9:25:00 PM

In these few beautiful lines you have weaved the texture of the cloth, we use in love and in life and in the search of God dear friend. Sorry for some delay in coming on this beautiful and Great write and thank you once again for your precious words on my Kashmir Poem. Love and best wishes always ......Ravindra K Kapoor