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At minimum- we spend one-third of life within a void, referred to as sound sleep; a void that grants serenity or strife- and waking up can make us smile or weep. Where do we go when we shut tight our eyes and fall into a deep, unconscious state; set free into some mystic space- likewise, a realm, where past and present, future wait? Is there a timeline where our minds can see the past- where memories again play on a stage; or look ahead to all that's meant to be encoded in a dream we cannot gauge? We spend one-third of life in these vast voids- set free into some mystic space- likewise, as strange, unconscious, traveling, humanoids! Where do we go when we shut tight our eyes? August 6, 2021 Contest: your Favorite Rhyme Poem In August 2021 Sponsor: Constance LaFrance

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Date: 9/2/2021 3:35:00 PM
Sandra, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my contest ~ love and serenity _ Constance
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Date: 8/6/2021 2:55:00 PM
I love where you took your poetic mind…into the void of dreams!
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