The Void In My Heart

my hands hang heavy and useless by my side
     fingers that stroked your thick white fur feel lost
                       i burst into bolts of tears 
                      they fall into the lifeless void
               where you sat and kept me company

                  the silence smacks me hard 
                i want to hear your happy pants
          memories flood over me til i’m drowning inside
          i long to see your devoted face and loving eyes
             to relive those happy, carefree moments 

       but the deafening void clings to me mercilessly 
            backyard trees droop sadly to the ground 
 the yard is empty without your paws patrolling the paths 


           i cannot hear the birds chirping in the trees
    i cannot see the butterflies meandering in the garden 
           i cannot smell the sweetness of the jasmine 
                for the void is too vast and too deep

 one cannot stop the waves from crashing into the shore. 










8/3/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Agustin Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 10:25 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... It's my prayer that the void in your heart will be filled with the peace and bliss of the Lord... midst and after your grieving moments. I can relate with you since we had our share of "pet-loss." God bless you.
Leiser Avatar
August 13, 2021 at 2:20 PM
Thank you, Beata. God bless you!
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 1:06 PM
beautiful poignant! like the last line.. congrats on your win!!
Leiser Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 2:57 PM
Thank you, Krish. :)
Kauffman Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 11:11 AM
So very sad, Laura. The experience of losing an animal friend is both haertbreaking and heart wrending! You have described that unwelcome silence and loneliness perfectly! Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you and your empty heart. So many can relate to your words!
Leiser Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 2:56 PM
Thank you, Sam. I appreciate your kind words. :)
Alex Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 5:13 AM
but the deafening void clings to me mercilessly backyard trees droop sadly to the ground - Intensity of feeling. Congratulations on your win!
Leiser Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 9:38 AM
Thank you, Christuraj! :)
Seeker Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 5:09 AM
Beautiful tribute and deep emotions, so well penned. Would have placed higher had the title of contest been different. Congrats on your win!
Leiser Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 9:37 AM
Thank you for my placement in your contest! I changed the title at the last minute, but too late!
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 5:06 AM
My condolences. I can understand how you must be feeling. Congratulations on your well deserved win
Leiser Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 9:36 AM
Thank you, Rama! :)
Theraven Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 10:20 AM
Laura, Fine title for a poem with a meaningful end. The hole they leave on our hearts., though we enjoyed every moment while they were near. I wonder what it was like when you called his name 'Sherlock!' across a busy park. -Richard
Leiser Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Thank you, Richard, for your kind words..I got a few looks when I called out Sherlock’s name. Some were quite amused! :)
Carmack Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 9:45 AM
I liked the imagery you used here. My condolences concerning your loss. My Boo is slowing down and I am already missing him. What was your dog's name?
Leiser Avatar
August 7, 2021 at 7:25 PM
Thank you, Rob..my dog’s name was Sherlock, and he was curious, too!
Horsman Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 11:19 PM
Wow, a poem filled with meaningful love.
Leiser Avatar
August 4, 2021 at 6:25 AM
Thank you, Harry… my dog was well loved..
Andresen Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 1:18 PM
- A deep longing and a big void ... a lot of emotions in your lovely poem, Laura - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 4:54 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, for commenting. I lost my precious lab last week after almost 13 years together..I am heartbroken :(
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