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The Void

i'm feeling as if there is a void, a big gaping hole in my heart. a hole that no one knows how to fix. not even you.. it cannot be filled. my heart longs for you, even though i know you're not good for me. but you are forbidden.. how do they expect me to just stop loving you? i'm sorry this is happening.. i don't know what to do anymore. maybe i should just try to forget you. no, never. just try to get over you.. but how can i? because you are the void.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/27/2010 12:43:00 PM
Can feel the pain
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Date: 4/15/2010 3:26:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Cayley. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/14/2010 8:31:00 PM
Very expressive
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Date: 4/14/2010 7:12:00 PM
void 'em . nice one!
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