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My considerations are devoured by the Void. Instinct and certainty are generally devoid. In slight spite of everything, I cease here. I'm stuck in the created voids phantom clear. I falter and appear to be stuck. In an endless descending twisting snuck. It's essentially impossible to escape this. I can't move away from my premonition bliss. I'm caught inside my spirit by the abyss. It feeds off my mood, which serves to permiss. It burns through me from the back to the front. It keeps me out because I can't confront. In my body freezing, relentless divider. I've turned into my sole survivor rider.
Written: October 1st, 2021

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Date: 10/3/2021 5:43:00 AM
I am a bit like Victor, stuck in the void at the moment....Delice
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Date: 10/2/2021 10:25:00 AM
Interesting, thought-provoking, Lasaad, particularly "considerations are devoured by the Void." Especially noteworthy rhymes.
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Date: 10/2/2021 6:21:00 AM
Never a good feeling to feel the void. Well expressed, Lasaad.
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Date: 10/2/2021 6:05:00 AM
Sometimes the trials in our lives make us feel that way, but there's always a way out, we should never give up hope. Enjoy your weekend Lasaad. Tom
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Date: 10/2/2021 3:41:00 AM
Introspective Sonnet with a meaningful message, my friend, Lasaad! Blessings.
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Date: 10/2/2021 5:32:00 AM
Thanks for your Delightful comment, dear Demetrios.
Date: 10/2/2021 1:17:00 AM
Excellent sonnet. I feel I'm in the void too.
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Date: 10/2/2021 5:34:00 AM
Thanks for reading, Victor. I don't mean to revive this feeling.

Book: Shattered Sighs