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The Void

My considerations are devoured by the Void.
Instinct and certainty are generally devoid.
In slight spite of everything, I cease here.
I'm stuck in the created voids phantom clear.

I falter and appear to be stuck. 
In an endless descending twisting snuck.
It's essentially impossible to escape this. 
I can't move away from my premonition bliss.

I'm caught inside my spirit by the abyss. 
It feeds off my mood, which serves to permiss. 
It burns through me from the back to the front. 
It keeps me out because I can't confront. 

In my body freezing, relentless divider. 
I've turned into my sole survivor rider.


Written: October 1st, 2021

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Delice Arleen Skelly October 3, 2021 at 5:43 AM I am a bit like Victor, stuck in the void at the moment....Delice

L Milton Hankins October 2, 2021 at 10:25 AM Interesting, thought-provoking, Lasaad, particularly "considerations are devoured by the Void." Especially noteworthy rhymes.

Vijay Pandit October 2, 2021 at 6:21 AM Never a good feeling to feel the void. Well expressed, Lasaad.

Tom Cunningham October 2, 2021 at 6:05 AM Sometimes the trials in our lives make us feel that way, but there's always a way out, we should never give up hope. Enjoy your weekend Lasaad. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis October 2, 2021 at 3:41 AM Introspective Sonnet with a meaningful message, my friend, Lasaad! Blessings. Sotto Poet October 2, 2021 at 5:32 AM Thanks for your Delightful comment, dear Demetrios.

Victor Buhagiar October 2, 2021 at 1:17 AM Excellent sonnet. I feel I'm in the void too. Sotto Poet October 2, 2021 at 5:34 AM Thanks for reading, Victor. I don't mean to revive this feeling.