The Void

A deep dark void..
Floating through nothingness..
A bottomless pit of emptiness..
Bouncing like a ball ..
In a blank hollow state..

Lifeless and meaningless..
No purpose 
In a state of lack..
Without the senses..
Vision and auditory sounds
Along scent and smell
Followed by..
Touch..

A lifeless avatar..
Pulled in the darkness of the void..
A stagnant whirlwind..
A separation of an avatar and a program..
A dysfunctional avatar without a computer..
Avatar desperately needs computer..
Computer is the consciousness of the avatar..
The essence of the avatar..

One day ..
The deep dark void was full..
Filled with unconditional love..
Life became meaningful 
Nothingness became everything..
All there is..
Everlasting and unlimited..
An divine avatar is now living a blissful life..
In a conscious virtual reality..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 9:34 AM
A mesmerizing poem, Robertina! Love the theme and flow of the muse ink. Outstanding poetry. Love and more love always.
B. Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Same to you Freddie.. Always a pleasure when you stop by and visit!! Thank your for your kindness.. Many blessings to you, Freddie!
Juman Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Like a fary tail end wonderful my dear
B. Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 3:50 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words!! Greatly appreciated..
Doll Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 4:57 PM
This is wonderful, Robertina. I enjoyed it very much. // Warren :)
Man Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 9:44 PM
A very creative free verse write, Robertina!
B. Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Thank you so much, Lyric Man.. Your support makes my day!!
Pandit Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 6:44 AM
I like the positive turn in the end, Robertina. Dark is void, as you say..I notice you filled it with love, and love overcomes everything.
B. Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay.. Your kindness is impeccable !! Blessings to you!
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