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The Void

A deep dark void.. Floating through nothingness.. A bottomless pit of emptiness.. Bouncing like a ball .. In a blank hollow state.. Lifeless and meaningless.. No purpose In a state of lack.. Without the senses.. Vision and auditory sounds Along scent and smell Followed by.. Touch.. A lifeless avatar.. Pulled in the darkness of the void.. A stagnant whirlwind.. A separation of an avatar and a program.. A dysfunctional avatar without a computer.. Avatar desperately needs computer.. Computer is the consciousness of the avatar.. The essence of the avatar.. One day .. The deep dark void was full.. Filled with unconditional love.. Life became meaningful Nothingness became everything.. All there is.. Everlasting and unlimited.. An divine avatar is now living a blissful life.. In a conscious virtual reality..

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Date: 7/22/2018 9:34:00 AM
A mesmerizing poem, Robertina! Love the theme and flow of the muse ink. Outstanding poetry. Love and more love always.
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Robertina B.
Date: 7/22/2018 3:51:00 PM
Same to you Freddie.. Always a pleasure when you stop by and visit!! Thank your for your kindness.. Many blessings to you, Freddie!
Date: 7/21/2018 1:25:00 PM
Like a fary tail end wonderful my dear
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Robertina B.
Date: 7/22/2018 3:50:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words!! Greatly appreciated..
Date: 7/6/2018 4:57:00 PM
This is wonderful, Robertina. I enjoyed it very much. // Warren :)
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Date: 7/4/2018 9:44:00 PM
A very creative free verse write, Robertina!
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Robertina B.
Date: 7/5/2018 2:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lyric Man.. Your support makes my day!!
Date: 7/4/2018 6:44:00 AM
I like the positive turn in the end, Robertina. Dark is void, as you say..I notice you filled it with love, and love overcomes everything.
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Robertina B.
Date: 7/5/2018 2:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay.. Your kindness is impeccable !! Blessings to you!

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