The Vital Holy Day

Getting ready for
Passover to shed us might
For joyous future

The significance 
Of God’s holiday is way
More vital than us
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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April 21, 2013 at 7:18 AM
Slavery has so many different ways of attaching its chains to us. Passover is a fantastic mental health concept. Let's see--slave at work, slave to hate, slave to food, slave to sex, slave to boredom, slave to money, slave to possessions, slave to money and so many more. Moderation is a good principle and not taking advantage of people is a good concept too.
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April 19, 2013 at 10:13 AM
Lovely, David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Breidenthal Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 8:16 PM
awww thankx so much! your comments make me beam!! xD
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