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The Vital Holy Day

Getting ready for
Passover to shed us might
For joyous future

The significance 
Of God’s holiday is way
More vital than us

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/21/2013 7:18:00 AM

Slavery has so many different ways of attaching its chains to us. Passover is a fantastic mental health concept. Let's see--slave at work, slave to hate, slave to food, slave to sex, slave to boredom, slave to money, slave to possessions, slave to money and so many more. Moderation is a good principle and not taking advantage of people is a good concept too.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2013 10:13:00 AM

Lovely, David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

J.W. Earnings
Date: 4/19/2013 8:16:00 PM

awww thankx so much! your comments make me beam!! xD