The Visitor

You stole in unbeknownst to me

with soft and silent tread,

You laid your hands upon my heart

and my confusions fled.


They stretched and flexed their crumpled wings

unused to flights of joy,

they tripped and skipped in gratitude

just like a little boy,


and by degrees my troubled soul

took solace from above,

my empty feelings of despair

transfigured by Your Love.



Last Modified: June 09, 2015 at 10:30 am
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Author Notes


...some time ago I spent seven weeks in confinement recovering from a spell of clinical depression.  I wrote this piece the day before I was released... a thank you note to God for pulling me through.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Fleming Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 1:51 AM
Very nicely done, Keith...very nicely done. Hope you are in good health! My best regards! :) john.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 12:06 PM
Thank you John... much appreciated my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Muideen Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 3:39 AM
So sad and so touched but I thank God for he lead you trough.........A.M.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 10:05 AM
Thank you very much! Keith
Lee Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 5:05 PM
Touching, Keith. Is versed to flow so smoothly. Nice job.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
June 9, 2015 at 7:05 PM
Thanks Scot... much appreciated.
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