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The Villanelle of David Torment of Mavis Chill Autumn Night Plight-

- The Villanelle Of David Torment of Mavis’ Chill Autumn Night Plight-


Mavis couldn't stop thinking about the chill
burr, twas just so autumn of a night
But she could never forget the frill

Cold morning, Mavis was shocked by the freeze
She found herself feeling rather light
Mavis couldn't stop thinking about the crisp leaves

Later, Mavis was spooked by a birds bill
She thought the situation had become rather recondite
But she could never be so still

David tried to distract her with his will
Said her mind had become too white
Mavis couldn't stop thinking about the chill

Mavis took action as the bird fulfill
The chill was like a toxic fight
See the bird wind forgot the downhill

Mavis nosedived like a night spill
her mind turned into a plight
Mavis cold and shaken couldn't stop thinking about the chill
But she could never forget the chill

Of a soon to been in days colder cold, cold winter’s months night

12/12/19
written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2019©
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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