The Vigil Vindicator

A blizzardery blitz. white spotted morning.
 A score plus five.
Nay, nay, nay, tis nay that came from his blundering mouth.
A child entering.
Falling in a gust of wind.
An appearance as small as a snowflake.
Taking sides, faltering at each clumsy move, 
made without pre thought.
Being a skivvy to his body.
A slave to his brain.
Rejection to such quantity.
Something as beautiful as is ugly.
Justice know.
Understanding, difficult.
While his soul is free, he, struggling to leave the world pure.
Rubbish, tripe, Venus , Jupiter.
His depth of responsibility shows.
Progress of reason may turn the snowflake to hail.
Rejection, damage, death, destruction,
he can no longer control.
Understanding the depth of difficulty.
We will have quantities of snowflakes and each an individual.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Agustin Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 1:58 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 11, 2016 at 10:41 AM
great imagery. LINDA
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