The Vigil

the vigil

where were you 
in those seamless days when
spirit was saying farewell
to its body

floating away 
as a ship out to sea
into the sunset all red and gold
like the leaves 
outside the hospital window.

did you know I was there 
that last  night 
touching you, holding on to you
I told the tales of us 
vaguely  remembered obscure things 
about our lives

I inspected your hands 
like pale white lilies they rested on your chest
every nail and crease accounted for
so I could keep them in mine 
when loneliness crept in

you did not move 
with the exception of your chest
rising and falling in noisy protest
against the sea building in your lungs
where were you 

when I left near dawn 
you must have known
some how sensed the lack of presence
because you left too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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