The View of Illicit Possibilities

Neighbor strolls shirtless Confining my true delight Our eyes meet briefly Feverishly I suppress Wishing I was a mower

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Kim Merryman

Date: 12/3/2011 2:11:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Natalie! Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2011 6:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "5th Poem on the Soup" contest Natalie. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/29/2011 10:43:00 PM

Congratulations Natalie on your win in the 5th poem contest.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/29/2011 10:35:00 PM

NAT;-) ,.. Congratulations on your wonderful win!! Thank you for the support and honor of reading the 5th poem you posted on the soup. * Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2011 10:32:00 PM

LOVED this one the first time I saw it too. A well deserved win, natalie!

Susan Buchel

Date: 9/17/2011 9:45:00 AM

Oh how fun is this!

Jack Horne

Date: 9/10/2011 11:21:00 AM

LOL, witty write, Natalie

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 9/10/2011 12:56:00 AM

get it girl! I saw results of a survey that said 93% of all women want guys to keep their damn shirts on...Cept' when they are at the pool, beach, AND MOWING GRASS!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2011 11:27:00 PM

OH, my this is so CUTE. I really like how you did yours . Unique and fun.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2011 2:33:00 PM

Thank you for sharing today Natalie. Love, Carol