The View of Illicit Possibilities

Neighbor strolls shirtless
Confining my true delight
Our eyes meet briefly
Feverishly I suppress
Wishing I was a mower
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Merryman Avatar
December 3, 2011 at 2:11 PM
Congrats on your win, Natalie! Kim
Brown Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "5th Poem on the Soup" contest Natalie. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 10:43 PM
Congratulations Natalie on your win in the 5th poem contest.
A   Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 10:35 PM
NAT;-) ,.. Congratulations on your wonderful win!! Thank you for the support and honor of reading the 5th poem you posted on the soup. * Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 10:32 PM
LOVED this one the first time I saw it too. A well deserved win, natalie!
Buchel Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 9:45 AM
Oh how fun is this!
Horne Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 11:21 AM
LOL, witty write, Natalie
Mister Roboto Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 12:56 AM
get it girl! I saw results of a survey that said 93% of all women want guys to keep their damn shirts on...Cept' when they are at the pool, beach, AND MOWING GRASS!
Dietrich Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 11:27 PM
OH, my this is so CUTE. I really like how you did yours . Unique and fun.
Brown Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 2:33 PM
Thank you for sharing today Natalie. Love, Carol
Sivey Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 6:49 PM
Great write! Clever way to view a front/back yard! Enjoyed your poem...Good luck in the contest!!
Roberts Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 6:35 PM
I once had a view like yours of the joggers going by , but the stupid trees have grown to big and can't even see the road now, lucky you.
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 6:33 PM
How many ladies want to move onto my block? :)
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