The View From My Window

Light
And warmth
On the pine
Two hours before
Dusk
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 11, 2009 at 6:53 PM
A breathtaking view, Jim! Best wishes to you, Carolyn
Winter Avatar
April 11, 2009 at 2:08 PM
Such simplicity, creating a feeling of enormous warmth and beauty. Lovely to read. Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
April 11, 2009 at 11:13 AM
Like a breath of sweet mountain air....beautiful!! Nicely done, Jim! ~ Carrie
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April 11, 2009 at 9:50 AM
this warm poem just made me relax a moment and take a deep-breath involuntarily! wow! powerful!! Jim, Jim
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April 11, 2009 at 8:38 AM
Sounds like a peaceful view to me. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
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