The Victor's War

War 
is sweet
victory!
We exposed their
weakness easily.
They were no real threat once
they realized that the fight
was done before their opened eyes.
Even if my win comes with their loss,
I can't shed a tear in front of the boss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/16/2009 2:42:00 PM
Interesting perspective in this poem. It leaves the reader with something to ponder. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 8/14/2009 2:01:00 AM
A lot of truth hetre Brandee.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/13/2009 5:56:00 PM
What an interesting form! Thank you for sharing, and for your kind comments. I really appreciate your feedback and encouragement. Keep writing! =]
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Date: 8/13/2009 11:21:00 AM
Brandee, Nice etheree. So much waring going on in the world. Take care, poet friend. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 8/11/2009 4:01:00 AM
Bittersweet ending to a compelling poem, Brandee! Indeed, keep your tears to yourself if you are recruited to fight in a war. Very good write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/10/2009 7:38:00 AM
Interesting stuff. This poem can be interpreted in so many different ways and that's what makes it so intruiging. A good write
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Date: 8/10/2009 5:32:00 AM
Perhaps your words did not get written the way you meant them to be or I am misunderstanding what you have written here. Love, Carol
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