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The Vicissitudes

My dearest friend,you have left me standing all alone My body is numb with sorrow I have no way to home. I am depressed and even frightened because you made such a bad decision But nonetheless you left me, without caring about my condition. Our friendship was like a plant that could not be uprooted by any storm, but today after leaving me , you proved it to be all wrong. What i heard was: A true friend is the one who stands by you in all times, good or bad and walks life's path hand in hand. But again i would repeat the same thing: you proved it wrong by moving on and hereby left me with the sternly storm............

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/1/2014 1:18:00 PM
Hi Crystal, this is a rather sad change... A deep, poem, that cuts the waiting soul in half. How dare he or anyone, keep love under a clouded storm? After they find it easy to move on. My friend, I came to read new poems from you. I notice this one, ONLY! How about writing another poem, allow the moon to inspire a new poem. I will be waiting to hear from you again. I'm back and enjoying the soup again. Thank you for always stopping by to visit. I'm glad you did well with them exam. xox~ Linda
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Date: 2/28/2014 7:45:00 AM
Sad but adorable! Jilting hurts. But to look on the bright side, atleast u wrote such a wondrful moving rhymin poem.
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Date: 2/18/2014 2:57:00 PM
This is a lovely poem Crystal..It is time to find a new friend...Tim
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