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The very last cut

Do you see my wrists? They cry blood when I do this; Push the blade deeper.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 5/7/2014 5:45:00 PM
nice poem but not a haiku they are about nature only this is a tanka good pen hugs
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Date: 5/7/2014 5:31:00 PM
disturbing but effective piece.
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