The Very Last Cut

Do you see my wrists?
They cry blood when I do this;
Push the blade deeper.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hamilton Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 5:45 PM
nice poem but not a haiku they are about nature only this is a tanka good pen hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 5:31 PM
disturbing but effective piece.
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