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The Vegetable Garden

The Vegetable Garden The garden beckons in the newness of the morning – Soft earth giving up the evening chill As long sunbeams kiss the soil good morning. Straight lines of carrots with curly tops Dig deep into the daylight hours Reaching down to be, at last, raised up. Radishes and lettuce rows sway in the breath Of foggy summer dawns leaving Glistening dew before the sun appears. Along the fence green pole beans scramble up On lattice twined with tendrils Climbing first to glimpse the garden growing. Hummingbirds and butterflies come each day To gaze and measure growth unseen Just the day before. The season ends with tall tomato plants Filling harvest baskets with their scarlet bounty As September bids seeds renew in sleep. The garden beckons, no longer filled With radish rows or carrot tops But promises of newly planted apple trees.

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Date: 3/30/2020 8:56:00 AM
Wonderfully written, Sam:-) Amazing imagery! Congratulations on your win...
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/18/2020 1:02:00 PM
Hi Edward! I must have missed your message. Thank you for your visit, congratulations and very kind words! Hope all is well. Blessings!
Date: 3/30/2020 2:32:00 AM
Mr Black Thumb is back to say congratulations for your wonderful win, Sam!
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Date: 3/14/2020 1:29:00 PM
As a self-proclaimed "black thumb", I admire not only your talent at shepherding plants from seed to fruition, but also value your poetic structure that mirrors a love of straight neat rows that appeal to your gardener's eye. My metaphor for the phases of writing poetry is seeding/tending/reaping, which I guess is kind of ironic in my case, but apropos in yours. I love the hint at resurrection in the lines "Dig deep into the daylight hours / Reaching down to be, at last, raised up". A beauty!
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Date: 2/4/2020 12:23:00 PM
This is why I love vegetables!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/4/2020 11:44:00 PM
Me too! Thank you for visiting!
Date: 8/21/2019 2:05:00 PM
Are you the one with the green thumb? My husband is that person in our family. I enjoyed your garden delight Sam! : )
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/23/2019 5:27:00 PM
Hi Connie, I love to garden and to share the harvest of the fruit that we grow. Our fruit trees still produce an abundant harvest. My grandmother taught me about gardens and gardening. It is one of her legacies for my life. Thank you again for your feedback and your encouragement. I know you do wonderful poems.

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