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The Vast Great Plains

Chasing the golden sun across America, Expressing wonderment at the vastness Of the Great Plains, distant farmhouses Dwarfed by gigantic silos awaiting harvest. Four lines from "Across the Great Plains" Written August 24, 2021 Abstracted August 30, 2021 Submitted to "Liberum Divisa 7" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Gregory Richard Barden

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Date: 8/31/2021 11:09:00 AM
Great four lines Milton…Delice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/31/2021 11:10:00 AM
Thank you, Delice. I don't know whether they are winning words, but I certainly enjoyed writing them.
Date: 8/30/2021 6:32:00 PM
Terrific visualization "distant farmhouses Dwarfed by gigantic silos awaiting harvest."
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/30/2021 7:27:00 PM
Thanks. I like these lines because they remind me of what we saw all through Iowa and South Dakota.
Date: 8/30/2021 2:51:00 PM
On its own, this a great poem, and it has an amazing vivid imagery. Hats off to a win!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/30/2021 3:16:00 PM
Thanks, Lasaad. I can hope!
Date: 8/30/2021 11:46:00 AM
"Empty Silos" has its own verses . . . ..
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/30/2021 12:53:00 PM
Yes, I should think so. I'm not sure they were all empty, but they sure were imposing.

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