November 19, 2023
Contest: The Vanity Of Pleasure
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
My sweet sensations in the grind, To indulge my lot In idle or hot?! The tug of war ‘twixt body and mind. The two’ve been fighting tooth and nail, Their feud led to naught, Crass carnal soft spot - The pleasure’s pull has tipped the scale. Dear me! Exciting versus plain, My visceral thought, Ascetic, I’m not - I would take pleasure, don’t mind vain.
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