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The Value of Work Nursery Rhyme

Young Lenny at school would dream through each day, He never read books, he just liked to play, So it wasn't a quirk That he didn't learn work: All play was leading his future astray. Grown Lenny farewelled his sweet mom and dad, He packed up and left the one home he had. But it wasn't a quirk That he couldn't find work: All play had left Lenny skill-less and sad. November 28, 2022 Children's Limericks Poetry Contest Eve Roper, sponsor

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/4/2022 12:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, David. Many blessings my friend

David Bose
Date: 12/5/2022 5:19:00 AM

Thank you, Eve. That was a fun contest, and I really appreciate your effort to put it on. --Dave

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2022 2:53:00 AM

Ho!! Ho!! Ho!! I know the perfect place for Lenny to get a job and the position. He would do really well working for Santa as a toy tester. Way to go with this winner. Congratulations. Sara

David Bose
Date: 12/5/2022 5:18:00 AM

Thanks, Sara. Maybe giving Lenny a toy-tester job will be inspiration for another limerick ... thanks, Dave

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/29/2022 12:38:00 PM

Well written. He needs some balance :)

David Bose
Date: 11/29/2022 1:40:00 PM

Thank you. Don't we all need some balance? Maybe it's autobiographical ...