The Valley of Death - Cerulean Odyssey

Cerulean Odyssey, Vol.5, No.12
hollow grams of weightless chatter
boxes full of empty shells
the only seed worth saving
generations of a scarlet thread
I catch myself flying much too high
bleak the landscape of the forgotten
in another city full of silent bones
stacked and ready for the tourists
miles and miles preposterous parade
six million was the last and counting
not like the valley of dry bones I’ve seen before
shivering on a deserted beach
footprints in the sand of a nowhere man
caught in traffic never moving
the hand of fear upon his head
no one’s there to ask the burning question
why me in this early morning fog
shifting shadows in an acid bath
four wheel drives stand idle grumbling
get me off this rock before my time
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Agustin Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 12:22 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 7, 2016 at 1:35 PM
Gerrit Verstraete, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 12:36 PM
Nice thoughts quite meaningful on The valley of Death, Cerulean
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