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The Vacation

Ocean waves lapped leisurely at the shore Rolling in and tickling the pebbled sands Laughing children squealed happily for more Splashing each other with their feet and hands Circling seagulls soared lazily above On trade winds seemingly close to the sun Parents gazed upon their children with much love Joining them in their gleeful summer fun They built sand castles - a total of three This trip was definitely - they agreed The best holiday for their family It fulfilled for them all, their every need They’ll come back again they already planned To bask in God’s glory – this serene land

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/23/2018 8:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Madeline - keep up the great work! :-) <3
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Madeleine Riha
Date: 3/24/2018 11:11:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 3/20/2018 9:08:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful--CONGRATS, Madeleine! Janice
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Madeleine Riha
Date: 3/20/2018 9:33:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/20/2018 7:35:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Madeleine.
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Madeleine Riha
Date: 3/20/2018 9:33:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/19/2018 9:54:00 PM
Lovely family memories. Well done, Madeleine.
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Madeleine Riha
Date: 3/20/2018 8:38:00 AM
Thank you Line!!

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