The Usual Life

Life Goes On Just Like The Days Pass,
Life Is Hard & Blurred Like Stained Glass,
Anybody Can Get Through A Problem Unless They Really Want Them,
Pain & Depression Just Seems To Tag Along With Em,
Some People Cant Deal With The Pain,
Some People Take There Life Cause Of Whats Stuck In Their Brain,
Alot Of People Cant Deal With The Loss Of A Loved One,
Some Learned To Stay,
Some Wanted To Run,
Most People Understand What We People Go Through,
Some Cant Take The Blame & Blame It On You,
Alot Of People Turned To Drugs In A Desperate Time Of Need,
Some Grabbed The Knife & Cut Until They Bleed,
All I Can Say After You Read,
Is Take A Second To Look Before You Judge Some Of My Peoples Long Life Chapter Book.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/12/2010 10:59:00 AM
This is excellent. I like the expressions regarding what people can and can't deal with. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/12/2010 3:18:00 AM
Nice thoughts on the usual life. enjoyed it
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Date: 6/11/2010 10:39:00 PM
I really like the consistency of the theme. There are some parts where I think the word choice could have been better, but over all this poem is well done. :)
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