The Us

it is a mystery to me.
comfort from nowhere.
in simple exchanges
and nodding of heads.
is it scent?.
or pheromones?.
or just presence?.
whatever, it happens --
an understanding of so much more than what is said.

here i am not alone.
i free myself from the ridicule of the They.
and comfort myself in the acceptance of the Us
as we wrap up and bind.
the craving must be sated.
less we starve our brains to insanity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nicholsen Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 7:30 AM
Lovely write very well written
Lamoureux Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 3:19 PM
Dropping by to wish you Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one.
Toil Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 4:28 PM
Thank you so much for your kind regards, Richard. And Merry Christmas to you as well!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 6:00 AM
It is that thing they call soul mates that resounds through this masterfully written poem Ben. I so relate to your words that are spot on!
Gibson Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 5:37 PM
Sam, I call this communion of like spirits. Very good poem. How is our little Darla? I watch for her.
Nance Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 7:15 AM
Ooh I love a good mystery :-P I love that energy of what you describe, what a great experience it is to entwine.
Kendrick Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 1:03 PM
There was a report on TV don't know if on discovery channel or another one like that about what makes one attracted to another and it isn't what we think it is either.Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit..Sara
Cayton Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 2:57 PM
This is so masterfully written and expressions profound, Sam. You know, I have been on this site for over 8 years, many different names and many a stages I have danced UPON MANY A STAGES...I hope to be blessed to read more of your poetry in the future. Have a great day! Cindy
Toil Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 3:13 PM
My dear Cindy, I am humbled by your praise. When I read your lovely poetry, I am transfixed by your perception of life. I have only one request to make. Let me see your tender loving face. I crave to see it so that I might attach your lovely image to your lovely poetry. Hugs;) Sam
Dylan Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 10:52 AM
Ben,, wow I am awe struck here.. your words dig deep in my soul.. I understand, your heart... it is deep and the pain from life... digs deep.. you really are a true artist my friend. Brooke
Toil Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 10:57 AM
Dearest Brook, I hunger for your approval. You are such an accomplished poet, I am aglow at your comment thank you. Luv & Hugs;) Ben
Toil Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 10:54 AM
Deborah, thanks for your warm comment. I must say I was afraid to post this one today for some reason. But I thought of your wonderful poem "Tight Rope" and it inspired me to go ahead and let it fly. Hugs;) Sam
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May 8, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Hi Sam, This was dreamy and soul soul feelings. Another write me giving you a huge applause. You are like a Poet Laurette to us all~ Thank you for sharing this fine write with us here. Peace, Deborah
Toil Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 10:59 AM
Deborah, thanks for your warm comment. I must say I was afraid to post this one today for some reason. But I thought of your wonderful poem "Tight Rope" and it inspired me to go ahead and let it fly. Hugs;) Sam
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