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The urge to fall

I want to disappear into oblivion Into an abyss so deep, I forget my own name I wish to fall so far, I no longer know how to speak When I open my mouth, no words will echo Not one thought Just darkness

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/5/2024 6:23:00 AM

Alison~ welcome to this site. I see greatness in you. Your willingness to be an open human being, portends that.. my favorite line,,,,I wish to fall so far, I no longer know how to speak. Very powerful and welcome to the human race! I get it! Our feeling are like the weatherm changeable! We are survivors and how we feel is not who you really are. Just a reflection of a moment in time. Pangiexx

Mat Ignacio

Date: 6/4/2024 6:34:00 AM

We’ll said, I like the flow and ambiance in this

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/16/2024 1:46:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts about a sad reality through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Karen Croft

Date: 5/14/2024 7:42:00 AM

What a very deep emotional poem