For 'Before we die' Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker Line of inquiry: Have we repaid all debts of love we owe?
No ledger tracks love no parchment records heartfelt— love flows to and fro coming inward with the tide owing nothing in return Love is not a trade— no mirrored debt to redress no score kept in trust It is pure, restless motion free flowing to intersect Gifts offered, received as starlight falls without claim as sun warms the field love bears neither weight nor score— It alights as a feather
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