The Unsung School Bell

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Poetic Form: Ottava Rima

Inspired: 2024 May 23

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~*~*~*~*~ ~*~*~*~*~ ~*~*~*~*~ Seriously, when I looked around, the verbs sound ... slightly, different. Then arise a clause thought ... scarcely, distinct. Until a noun disturbs rounds ... barely, noting. Conversed in pronouns, was abound ... in other words ... adjectives ... adverbs, school's out, she leaves a book and parts. Wave to pause ~*~*~*~*~ ~*~*~*~*~ ~*~*~*~*~ then open--it's signed, "Thanks for the Spelling path, Miss. June, your "C" student Claire" --strange, best in Math. ~*~*~*~*~ ~*~*~*~*~ ~*~*~*~*~

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/23/2024 4:45:00 AM

very apropos considering for many this week heralds the end of the school year. Trust me, as a former teacher (English & German) we are definitely ready for the end of the school year. Nicely done, William. Have a great day, Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/23/2024 7:09:00 AM

Emile's Canada? Only my 2 oldest grt-grdsons are out tomorrow in NM, my grdkids in my soupmail Thr30, the rest CA & WA all JUN and 2 grdkids in CT too but they go to some private Montessori--I think HI out tomorrow. Have an A+ Day, Sara. Aloha, William