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The unseen gaze

The hidden Beauty no one sees, It speaks when the world is lost in sleep, Yet the moon caught a gaze- someone admiring it, While others still lived in their virtual slit. They peeped blue ray-she felt the glowing mist, They missed the grace the silence kissed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/9/2025 11:30:00 AM
Hello Melancholly Coffee, i enjoy to watch the moon at night. My favourite moon is the full moon. i always see a face. i can watch that moon for hours. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/11/2025 9:33:00 AM
Hello melancholly Coffee, Your welcome. I hope you are having a good day. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Melancholy Coffee
Date: 7/10/2025 5:01:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Darlene. Wishing you a pleasant day ahead.
Date: 6/30/2025 11:37:00 AM
"...the grace the silence kissed..." well said, moon-lover...
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Melancholy Coffee
Date: 7/10/2025 4:55:00 PM
"Thank you kindly for your thoughtful words, Gray Squirrel. I truly appreciate your time and reflection. Wishing you peace and inspiration always.

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