The unseen gaze

The hidden Beauty no one sees,
It speaks when the world is lost in sleep,
Yet the moon caught a gaze- someone admiring it,
While others still lived in their virtual slit.
They peeped blue ray-she felt the glowing mist,
They missed the grace the silence kissed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 9, 2025 at 11:30 AM
Hello Melancholly Coffee, i enjoy to watch the moon at night. My favourite moon is the full moon. i always see a face. i can watch that moon for hours. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 9:33 AM
Hello melancholly Coffee, Your welcome. I hope you are having a good day. Hugs. /Darlene/
Kaeen Avatar
July 10, 2025 at 5:01 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Darlene. Wishing you a pleasant day ahead.
Squirrel Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 11:37 AM
"...the grace the silence kissed..." well said, moon-lover...
Kaeen Avatar
July 10, 2025 at 4:55 PM
"Thank you kindly for your thoughtful words, Gray Squirrel. I truly appreciate your time and reflection. Wishing you peace and inspiration always.
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