The Unseen, As Swirling Ebbs of Time Plod Along

I feel very privileged to have been able to contribute something small to a second collaboration with poet extraordinaire, Robert Lindley, whose mastery of all forms of verse continues to inspire. Thank you, Robert, for such fellowship and inspiration.

The Unseen, As Swirling Ebbs Of Time Plod Along
A collaboration with Robert Lindley
19th October 2018

Fight disbelief, as its intended power is to deceive
its low, hard constant drone, echoes shattered moans
with razor knife edge, bloodied cuts hide in its deep,
at dusk's waning hours, path falls to the cold and dead
And what speaks in dreams, oft walks in shadows at day
spreading aching sadness, horrific chills sent to curse.

Yet disbelief will not be fought
for waging of battle demands that you believe
existence says, believe you do not
for from whence, otherwise,
did disbelief's bleeding red-blades appear
if not from blindness, saddest of such sad truths ?

Is this black magic in its unfathomable infinite embrace
cut short by false Gods that once held its great powers
nay, the same, blood for blood that mercilessly seethes
from its savagery, demands we live weak, wasted lives
In soul destroying expanse, sorrows birth deeper woes
man a pawn, dwelling within Time's never ending shows.

Yet the ancient false Gods be not false
for only true Gods could control and mask 
their own hidden goals and divinity's truth,
and their every mysterious whim,
as the oscillations of a cruel lover,
echo divinities that we'll not ever divine.

If one sees, finds a way to break the mold
they are targeted, struck down long before the old
as were celebrated artists felled in fleeting youth,
rotted in earthen soil, living now in dreams of more
Behold, evil, slow-walks hand in hand with father Time
recurring patterns, anger born, in man's fallen mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/26/2018 11:47:00 PM
Vagaries of truth resist our search...nice again gentlemen!
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 10/27/2018 1:13:00 AM
Thanks, James, Robert's pen lead this piece so well. Your comment, more than being valued, is incisive and poetic... I've not seen your works yet, but your words leave me absolutely no choice but to have a look...
Date: 10/20/2018 10:10:00 AM
Hi Lawrence, another excellent collaboration by Robert and yourself. You use the free verse form with such skill, opening up your thoughts to such skilfull heights. I can drown myself within such glorious words. Your words have such power to paint such strong images in the mind. This is such a creative write by you both. It has to be a fave. Have a wonderful weekend. your friend always....Mike.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 10/20/2018 11:16:00 AM
Thank you Mike, very encouraging. Great inspiration from Robert, and deeply appreciated encouragement from you.
Date: 10/19/2018 2:56:00 PM
Your imagery is outstanding, worthy of many pauses of appreciation. Again, your combined pens struck profound-gold. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 10/20/2018 12:58:00 AM
Thank you CC, great creativity and expression from Robert, I'm pleased to have had a little something to add. Very glad you enjoyed.
Date: 10/19/2018 6:17:00 AM
This poem is very deep..meaningful articulation. The first stanza is a brilliant start for the rest of the poem..elegantly depicted..kudos to both, Lawrence and Robert.
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Date: 10/19/2018 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, great inspiration flowing from Robert's mighty pen.
Date: 10/19/2018 4:48:00 AM
Thank you Lawrence. Your inspiration, kindness, immense awesome creativity are all exceptional revelations of the generous soul that you are. A blessing and a great pleasure to write with you my friend.
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Date: 10/19/2018 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, Robert, another very satisfying write shared.
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