The Unknown Wish

(A simple poem)

They say I am the dark horse That is destined till my end To gallop like the broken soul In the shadows of the wind But I am just the simple soul, And so they say I’ll fail Because I am the gentle whisper Among the constant yell. I have my dreams I dream at night. I have my prayers I pray, And though I run this race to win I’ve lost along the way. I’ve sat and pondered upon this life, My thoughts have drifted afar. I’m somewhat like the wayward wish That cannot find its star. I cannot stop upon this road And say my journey ends For when I think that life has stopped I find it just begins— Therefore the hour passes on And side by side we stand… Time and I, soul in soul Must travel hand in hand…. Chained to seconds, chained to minutes That do not pause for me So in their flow, so shall I go And be where they shall be, And if the minutes to which I’m chained Are granted their tomorrow Then so am I granted this And beckoned then to follow— Holding not to yesterday, It was not mine to keep. I leave it standing in the past, There in my soul to sleep, I travel on because I must, Though the dark horse, I may be. I travel on to get somewhere— A mended soul set free. A gentle whisper among this yell— This world, this life, this place Running still with the flame of hope To endure this wretched race. And I’ll keep on running And keep on running, Though my thoughts may drift afar, I’ll win this race as the unknown wish That claims its sacred star.
~T.S. Wilkins~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 5/14/2012 6:58:00 AM
it was nice stopping by to read you poem today.....keep the good work up..and welcome to poetry soup
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T.S. Wilkins
Date: 5/14/2012 8:37:00 AM
Thank you, Prince Ekpemandu!
Date: 5/12/2012 3:09:00 AM
Very wonderful poem... Terry
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T.S. Wilkins
Date: 5/12/2012 5:04:00 AM
Thank you, Terry!
Date: 5/11/2012 2:50:00 PM
Hello beautiful, I actually really, really ,really AND really enjoyed this poem of yours....Beautifully written. "I want to see more of your work!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 5/12/2012 6:14:00 PM
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Date: 5/12/2012 5:03:00 AM
Thank you, INK-U-SCRIPT, for your very kind words.
Date: 5/10/2012 8:59:00 PM
very good
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Date: 5/11/2012 1:35:00 PM
Thank you, Keith!
Date: 5/9/2012 9:57:00 AM
I very much so appreciate reading your work! Very well spoken and STRONG!!! Keep up the good work! Hope to see more and soon.
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Date: 5/10/2012 2:56:00 PM
Thank you, Danielle, for your very kind words!
Date: 5/8/2012 3:05:00 PM
you write so beautifully T.S...hope to see much more of your poems..always..Joseph
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T.S. Wilkins
Date: 5/10/2012 2:55:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph, for your very kind words!
Date: 5/7/2012 11:48:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you T.S. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 12:35:00 PM
Thank you, Carol, for your very kind words.
Date: 5/5/2012 3:11:00 PM
A very pleasurable read thankyou :) the poetry forms are on the left hand side of the page under RESOURCES second one down. I thought this may help as you put you didn't know under form of poetry. Hope that helps :)
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Date: 5/6/2012 6:27:00 AM
Thank you, Amanda, for your kind words and very helpful tip!!
Date: 5/5/2012 9:28:00 AM
Very nice... Terry
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Date: 5/6/2012 6:26:00 AM
Thank you, Terry, for your kind words.
Date: 5/4/2012 5:12:00 PM
What a wonderful journey. Loved it.
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Date: 5/5/2012 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Ryan Harris, for your kind words!
Date: 5/4/2012 10:53:00 AM
this is beautiful. Good luck in your journey.
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Date: 5/5/2012 5:57:00 AM
Thank you, Jacque Graham, for your kind words and well wishes.
Date: 5/4/2012 6:36:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup ,T.S. - You write well,and I hope you will write more - read and comments back alot of poem here.Have a lovely weekend to you, love from Norway and Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/5/2012 5:57:00 AM
Thank you, Anne Lise Andresen, for the kind welcome and kind words!
Date: 5/4/2012 4:57:00 AM
T.S. welcome to the soup, I like the flow of this from start to finish..David
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Date: 5/4/2012 6:19:00 AM
Thank you, David, for your kind words and welcome!
Date: 5/3/2012 10:46:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem very much.. My favorite line - "I’m somewhat like the wayward wish, That cannot find its star." Everyone searches for their place in this world, and every time we think we've figured it out.. Well, life seems to shake things up again.. Great Job
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Date: 5/4/2012 6:20:00 AM
Thank you, Major H, for your kind words!
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