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The Unknown Visitor

As I stood gazing through the windows , A light lit in the far way meadows . Wondering at the sight , I tiptoed with all my might , Only to find a stranger in the isolated hut . He lowered his gaze as I stood there mouth shut and requested for a night's stay, for he was a lost traveler without a way. His speech belonged to those of high stands and garb of those of the Grand's. With a tinge of pity ,I let him rest Providing him with the things to my level best. As the dawn broke ,I hurried Only to find him good in his limbs. He bowed down to me and wished a hearty goodbye For he was none other than the Prince of Molokai . -Ism

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Date: 6/8/2016 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations and welcome to our community Ismath. Thank you for the read...
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Date: 6/8/2016 11:53:00 AM
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Date: 5/13/2016 9:24:00 AM
good starter welcome to the soup try the comps they are great stephen
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Date: 5/11/2016 12:12:00 AM
Ismath,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/10/2016 12:44:00 PM
Ismath, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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Date: 5/9/2016 4:44:00 PM
This is nice, Ismath, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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