The Universe's Dance

The Universe's Dance

Transitions of the obstruction of life 
To the peacefulness of the night
Or a new beginning that a rising sun can bring without a fight
And in the late hour when everything becomes quiet

Nature has a way to transform
Within this turning of time
Every living spec upon this ever changing storm
To which we play this nursery rhyme

Maybe by a birds sweet sound
That brings a sweet remembrance to a season or day
And within a condensed shift in life a smile abounds
Upon a glowing face

The way the wind softly caresses your face
With a cool breeze
To wave off the heat of the day
With a whistling sound moving melodically free

How the drip drop of rain hitting a window pane can calm a tone
With its streams of life being poured from the heavens
To revive a world that struggles for life sitting on a disintegrating throne
And spring a newness into each creation with no discretion 

An uncontrollable fire, breathing in the sky
Giving endlessly its lantern to lead us by each step
And warming our bodies when the cold starts to cry
Frightfully showing its characters of depth

Flickering candles floating in the atmosphere
Decorating a painted canvas of deep blue
Wishes casted off into their whispering ear
With silent hopes of dreams coming true

How amazing is a small and fragile seed 
That can create a feast for Kings
And feed a family in need
And if planted again grows once more in spring

We so carelessly disregard the treasures that are all around
These viable precious gifts, nature holds out to us so unselfishly
Returning day after day, season after season unannounced
Unlocking valiant colors of wonders on towers of stems rising from the ground... so proudly 

All these elements work in unity to perform a theatrical dance upon our stage
They are the silent voices within the earth
Imparting without antcipating anything to gain
Unstained by our constant denial, clasping to last place in our world of worth

Eyes of sadness our universe never reflects
For it hides its emotions within its design
And even the smallest spectator never detects
Its unfailing true love for all man kind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/18/2021 6:25:00 AM
I too like these in between moments. I think this one is my favourite so far. Your pieces all hold a bit of sadness. I had a friend once say that a sunny idyllic picture will hold your attention briefly but one with shadows will keep you coming back. I suspect it is the same with poetry.
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Date: 11/19/2012 7:36:00 PM
I like this very much because it rings so true. The world we have gives us everything. We have to learn not to take too much, but that message is contrary to the culture we have. It takes an astute writer to know that, but you are not alone. Thank you for your message in this work. It gives me hope.
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Date: 8/10/2012 5:22:00 PM
An amazing write tammy. I admire your creativity and your vision.Thanks also for your heart warming commentson my poem Let there be light. I am grateful. - Mohammad
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